tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post8135784010885268609..comments2024-03-08T23:17:58.891-08:00Comments on MY ART JOURNAL: Dawn for Hopper's Poetry ChallengeLynn Cohenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12094038275377357886noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-21387760327139641202008-04-18T08:01:00.000-07:002008-04-18T08:01:00.000-07:00Hopper you are too kind. I maybe took one class in...Hopper you are too kind. I maybe took one class in Under Grad work in poetry 100 years ago, but remember nothing learned.<BR/>The words just rolled out and I laid them down with keyboard.<BR/>No idea of WHAT I did.<BR/>No idea what "slanted rhyme" is or where?<BR/>No idea of "intricacies" you mention.<BR/>I guess I was just lucky! LOL<BR/>(I actually thought I might get laughed at). And what is an aubade?<BR/><BR/>HB thank YOU too for such accolades, my head spinnith over.<BR/><BR/>Thanks all.Lynn Cohenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12094038275377357886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-37639853631480522002008-04-18T05:50:00.000-07:002008-04-18T05:50:00.000-07:00Hi Lynn, this has happened to me too. Waking up t...Hi Lynn, this has happened to me too. Waking up tossing and turning with ideas and an itch to get to work. Great fun.sukipoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09351851210507048174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-34368934296894420492008-04-18T03:51:00.000-07:002008-04-18T03:51:00.000-07:00ha ha this is delightful, absolutely YOU!ha ha this is delightful, absolutely YOU!soulbrushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16879115279499153124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-88386260632325496282008-04-18T00:56:00.000-07:002008-04-18T00:56:00.000-07:00thanks for playing along lynn... i'm a total insom...thanks for playing along lynn... i'm a total insomniac myself... think i've seen the sun come up for every day now like four years in a row... getting to be a bit of a compulsion for me... like i've got to see the sun come up... ah well...<BR/><BR/>liked your aubade a lot... lots of layers working here... sort of like your work in design i'm guessing... funny how skills from one craft are so well transfered into another...<BR/><BR/>i also like very much how you've worked some slant-rhyme into the piece... have you done any courses on poetry??? you seem to have a real good grasp of its intricacies... something i'm trying to come to grips with...<BR/><BR/>again... thanks for keeping in touch with me... i appreciate the friendship...Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-79674760843138848662008-04-17T21:31:00.000-07:002008-04-17T21:31:00.000-07:00Lynn...this is great! in fact I should wrote GREAA...Lynn...this is great! in fact I should wrote GREAAAAAAAT!<BR/><BR/>yes we see all the things related to your life...but this poem transcends your personal life and experiences...<BR/>it's talking about love's formless and sizzling being which is yearning to take a shape...a form ... and this is done at dawn... that time of the day significant of birth... <BR/><BR/>oh ya... love is born into art... this is the cry of creativity...<BR/>and you have always been a fountain full of art... full of creativity... since you are full of love... and care...<BR/><BR/>love to you my sleepless love-stricken caring friend...<BR/>Namaste!human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-10839213019875766952008-04-17T17:24:00.000-07:002008-04-17T17:24:00.000-07:00I can just visualize this when your creative juice...I can just visualize this when your creative juices are at work. No rest for the Creative mind!! :)Cris, Artist in Oregonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15067969984221375853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-63992234792830619132008-04-17T15:52:00.000-07:002008-04-17T15:52:00.000-07:00Elspeth you are too funny...and of course it was H...Elspeth you are too funny...and of course it was Henry...poor Henry...no where to be at peace.Lynn Cohenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12094038275377357886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3069433582032233420.post-45267024848403220942008-04-17T15:18:00.000-07:002008-04-17T15:18:00.000-07:00The second line of your poem smells of Henry.The second line of your poem smells of Henry.Elspethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08818240263719381120noreply@blogger.com